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Her soul smells of the
Warm earth.

Long gaceful legs are her roots
While her arms reach to the stary
Night sky like branches of a
Great tree.

Her soft hair are leaves like that
of a crying willow, all things flock
To her gentle embrace.

Red vines coil around her trunk, that she
Only blossoms under the sparkling Moon.

I too now rest in her arms, looking
into the sky that I can never
Return too.

Yet being with her, the Red One,
heals my loss with her touch.

Sleeping under the sun, her flowers
bloom under her mother, the Moon.

Though I wish to be
at my Father's side, I don't
want to leave her arms.

As she saved me, even though
I have killed so many of
Her own kin.

The thought of her burning under
the hated sun, made my heart
change now that I've bonded
With her, the Red One.

Though I am a demon bird
I wish to remain at her
side, keeping her warm heart
To my greedy self.

Could this be the feeling
that mortals call Love? I truly
care for the Red One, but could
I love this Earth Goddess?
This is a poem for the House of Night Series, mostly Temped!

Its in Rephaim POV, mostly about Stevie Rae!
I also have one in her POV of him, but I'll be putting that up later!!

Hope ya like it!

Characters DO NOT BELONG 2 ME!!!!

MarchenHope
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InquieteNightshade Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
YOU MY FRIEND ARE A GENIUS!!!! This blew my mind!!!! Thank you so very much.
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Hehe, its so old but ppl still love it

Thanks!
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InquieteNightshade Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
Your welcome. :)
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eevee316 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
:heart: I love it!!!! :heart: They are my favorite couple out of HoN. It fits them so well, i dnt thnk the Cast duo culd do bettr than it. :)
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Belladonna-Tabitha Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
Naw, i thought it was really cute. I loved all the Earth imagery.
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anonymous92 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010
lovely poem it so fits their relationship.
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you, I loved working on it so much
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anonymous92 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010
I enjoyed reading it.
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Glad ya liked it!
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missemia97 Featured By Owner May 4, 2010  Student General Artist
I just finished reading burned (literally, five seconds ago.) Stevie rae and Rephaim make a lot of... revelations in this one. And I adore the poem, it's perfectly in character. :)
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
God that book was just TMI over and over but I luved it till the end!! And Rephaim LOOKS SEXY IN A HUMAN BODY!!! HE BETTER TURN INTO THAT SOON!! And F Dallas, he should've listened before goin off on Stevie Rae like that..he is actin JUST like Asshole Erik in Chosen!!!

AND I just LUV Stark for mocking Kalona like that near the end I was just laugh my ass off saying "WHAT THE FREAK ARE YOU DOIN MAN??!!" the whole time!! XDD

Oh and Nefert can go jump in a DAM VOLCANO and NEVER COME OUT!!! She's gone over board this time...uhhhhh and she even freaker than before...I WANT AWAKENED TO COME OUT NOW!!! XD

Thanks for the two faves!! Zoey&Stark Stevie Rae&Rephaim I HEART THEM A BILLION TIMES!!!
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missemia97 Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Student General Artist
Haha, I must agree with everything you said. Although I was kinda 'wth' with the whole dark and light bulls. I mean... why bulls? :P And yes, Dallas was exactly like Erik. And Rephaim/Stevie Rae is my fav couple. Ohmygoodness, I hope they come out with Awakened FAST! XD
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner May 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah the Bulls are nuts and who know why they are there!! I REALLY WANNA SEE EREBUS SOMETIME SOON!! We see next BUT NEVER HER FREAKIN LOVER!!! Wish he would show up ASAP!!

If Kalona and Erebus got into a fight, my freakin money is on Erebus cause he IS the god hottie!!!
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missemia97 Featured By Owner May 7, 2010  Student General Artist
I know, i hope we meet Erubus at some point. He sounds like a cool character. My money's on him in a fight with Kalona. haha, I wonder what Nyx's reaction would be if Kalona won. XP
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner May 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
She would kick his ass all the way to hell itself, I don't think she let her lover get taken down like that! XDD Nyx just rules!! And she is funny somehow too XD!!
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missemia97 Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Student General Artist
now i have a mental image of Nyx bodyslamming Kalona. XP Nyx is so awsome. :)
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
WooT WooT for that!! XDD Still the one thing that has the BEST Vampires ever is...Hellsing!! That Manga/Anime is the best ever...both it and House of Night can KICK Twilight ass...and yes I've read all four books but really like the last one cause it funny but hate how they have their vamps!!
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Georgia-Lou-Erin Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
WOW! Deep! I love this you have a serious talent for this! :love:
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
XD thanks, I LOVED Tempted sooo much!! BUT HATED IT WHEN HEATH DIED!!!! and I so think Stevie Rae and the raven guy are gonna get to together, they just seem like it!! I've got one for her POV on him!
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Georgia-Lou-Erin Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010
Ill make sure I read it! :)
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Okz, thank you!
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SaphybOO Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Traditional Artist
Oh my gosh.
This is so good. You're very creative. I love that series. i have yet to finish Tempted though I want to wait to read it when it's closer to the due date of Burned.
But, goodness. This is great. I love the idea of Rephaim having a very poetic mind full of metephors. It's so beautiful.
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Hehe... thx alot, I'm gonna put up her view of Rephaim in a few minutes...
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SaphybOO Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Traditional Artist
Sweetness. I can't wait to read it.
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Its almost done, hope your the first to read it!
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SaphybOO Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Traditional Artist
I hope so too. :3
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Its up! Go read and hope ya like it!!
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SaphybOO Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Traditional Artist
ok, I will. x3
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TaevaFae Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009
I love the idea of a Rephaim x Stevie Rae pairing. ^^
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Hehehehe...its in the book Tempted of the House of Night series! Have you read them yet?
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TaevaFae Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
Yea, I have. Rephaim x Stevie Rae are my favorite pairing in there. I think there is great potential between the two of them... like Beauty and the Beast. ^^
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yes, i just find them TOO CUTE!!! And they would be alot like Beauty and the Beast...I WANT THE NEXT BOOK TO HURRY UP!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO ZOEY!!!!! TT_TT
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TaevaFae Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009
I personally can wait for what happens to Zoey. I wanna know what happens to Rephaim. I have a theory that when he chooses good, cuz he seems to only be starting to choose good, that when he does choose, he'll change like Stevie Rae and Stark did. Though both were human-ish in shape and such. But I wonder if Rephaim will take on more of a human-ish figure when he turns good. Thats my theory anyway. Everyone says "oh it'd be gross if they were together because of the beak" but I wonder if that stuff will go away and he'll just have the wings.
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Hmmm, I like that theory alot! And who gives an F about if he has a beak or not, its on the inside ppl!!!

And my idea for Zoey, if she wakes up (which I hope) I HOPE SHE SKINS KALONA ALIVE FOR WHAT HE DID!!! Or she'll be most too upset about Health death (which I was like "NUUUUUUUUU!!" I was starting to like him!!) And Erik is just being an A*% to her, whatca going think now when she's like dead? HUH ERIK??

LOL
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TaevaFae Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
lol, Erik would have been better suited to the death. Heath and Stark were better suited to tolerating each other because they both had something to offer Zoey. I was soooo upset when Heath died. I literally screamed "YOU BITCH!" at Kalona. But thats probably just me. XD
I hope she skins him alive too. Like, walks into that court with a much needed air of authority. Heath's death might have been the kick in the ass she was needing!
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MarchenHope Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
I SO AGREE WITH YA!!!! Kalona is gonna wish he NEVER WOKE UP!!!!!!! I WANT TO NEXT BOOK TO COME OUT NOW!!!!
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